I like it so far, I just think it's a little bit fast paced, I know you are planning to add more to this game (and I think you should, we don't have a lot of mpreg games and yours sounds promising) but I think this first initial scene felt a little bit rushed, you could add more dialogues, more dirty talk or something, just so we can feel a little bit more immerse and not just like he grabbed us, fucked us and done, you know? but I really enjoyed what you have put out so far, we could become the town slut, help populate this place, maybe teach a little bit of hygiene (not too much tho lol) and the first one could be like our pimp/lover I don't know, just some ideas, but hope you keep posting and updating <3
Hi Wiccane! Thank you so much for your feedback! And yeah, admittedly the writings not paced well, (the blowjob scene is literally 3 dialogues long lol) and also i don't like how i've written certain dialogues. English is not my primary language so thats why some scenes have gramatical errors i might've missed. I'll try my best to improve on that regard. I'll be planning an update for late October/Early November. Again, thank you!
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really strange story but really fun
YES.
Uh is there an a android version? I'd love to download the vn and support this❤️🙏🏻
I like it so far, I just think it's a little bit fast paced, I know you are planning to add more to this game (and I think you should, we don't have a lot of mpreg games and yours sounds promising) but I think this first initial scene felt a little bit rushed, you could add more dialogues, more dirty talk or something, just so we can feel a little bit more immerse and not just like he grabbed us, fucked us and done, you know? but I really enjoyed what you have put out so far, we could become the town slut, help populate this place, maybe teach a little bit of hygiene (not too much tho lol) and the first one could be like our pimp/lover I don't know, just some ideas, but hope you keep posting and updating <3
Hi Wiccane! Thank you so much for your feedback! And yeah, admittedly the writings not paced well, (the blowjob scene is literally 3 dialogues long lol) and also i don't like how i've written certain dialogues. English is not my primary language so thats why some scenes have gramatical errors i might've missed. I'll try my best to improve on that regard. I'll be planning an update for late October/Early November. Again, thank you!
-Birch
Will this be available for Android? I like the premise and I can't play with joiplay
Hi! thank you for taking interest in my game. I'll try to export the game so that it is compatible for Android devices.
Nice the story is great but wish it was longer anyway well done!
Thanks! I'll be planning to update the game sometime in the future!
we need several more types of guys to be mpregged by. Like Himbo.
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